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Hey ppl!
My first non cat-related post! I wrote this poem in Language arts in like a minute and a half a couple of days ago. I think it is good, but I would like some second(or third, etc.) opinions. (it is not from my point of view. I am not that depressed,
)
Where inside they go, By Wesley(that is my real name, suprise suprise. Yup, i have faked you all out for a long time
)
My two friends
comprehend not
this that befalls me.
They know not why, and when i sigh.
If only i could see
what it is they have inside,
in order to be happy.
I wish, i wish,
i wish to know,
where inside themselves they go,
In order to be happy.
Well? Whadya think?
Joecool(yes i will probably continue to use this psedonym)
Where inside they go, By Wesley(that is my real name, suprise suprise. Yup, i have faked you all out for a long time
My two friends
comprehend not
this that befalls me.
They know not why, and when i sigh.
If only i could see
what it is they have inside,
in order to be happy.
I wish, i wish,
i wish to know,
where inside themselves they go,
In order to be happy.
Well? Whadya think?
Joecool(yes i will probably continue to use this psedonym)