I'm trying to write and sing precisely what my fiance means to me as a very personal wedding gift... and it's proving a little more difficult than I'd imagined! So far I've only got two verses.... and I'm in desperate for a chorus.
I could do with some opinions please
Please feel free to be brutally honest, I want this to be perfect!
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I donâ€[emoji]8482[/emoji]t need the words
To tell you how I feel.
You look at me and know what I am thinking of.
I can say it with a silence
And know you heard it all -
All Iâ€[emoji]8482[/emoji]ve felt inside me since I fell in love
You kept me to ground
While teaching me to fly
The earth beneath my feet and yet a clear blue sky
You saved me from drowning
In a sea of sorrows
Where would I be now without you? Heaven knows
I could do with some opinions please
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I donâ€[emoji]8482[/emoji]t need the words
To tell you how I feel.
You look at me and know what I am thinking of.
I can say it with a silence
And know you heard it all -
All Iâ€[emoji]8482[/emoji]ve felt inside me since I fell in love
You kept me to ground
While teaching me to fly
The earth beneath my feet and yet a clear blue sky
You saved me from drowning
In a sea of sorrows
Where would I be now without you? Heaven knows