Double quatrains

Koveshnikov

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play the flute play
how many years ago
you promise paradise
luring to hell
love is still alive
she can't burn to the ground
rubbed bowstring
poisoned arrow
 

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Morning’s Gift (Morya’s Double Lock)

I catch a fleeting glimpse- a waking dream
of sirens frolicking to start their day.
They’re full of joy, it seems that they’re at play;
I want to join them in the nearby stream.

I often wave with hopes that one will stay
but they all vanish in the rising steam.
They are but a mirage, so it would seem,
but still I’m buoyed by morning’s brief ballet.

I don’t despair their passing from my sight
the morn is brighter, sound now comes awake;
as critters scamper, pretty birds take flight.

If fantasy, or optical mistake
it none-the-less says things have started right.
and for a dreamer, that’s a decent break.


Joyce Kilmer

© Lawrencealot – November 14, 2013
 
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wonderful poem :)
 
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Google has it all :)
 
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