I thought this might be a nice place to post some of our writings...anything from poetry to short stories or just thoughts.
I have been writing poems for about 10 years now. Many or most of them are ''mushy love stuff'' (AlexJr's opinion
.)...or ''cheezy'' (Naomi's opinion
). Some have to do with unusual things, like my former blue '88 Crown Victoria! hehehe.
Anyway, I'll start this out by posting one of my very favourite poems for you...it is called:
DREAMS OF YOU
Somtimes, in the deepest, darkest of nights
After everyone has turned out their lights
I hear your voice, you seem to be saying
That in the dark night, is where you'll be staying
Buried under layers of dreams upon dreams
Almost quite real...yet so very extreme
Days turn to nights and nights into days
Darkness that is followed by the sun's rays
Again, I awaken from a dream about you
Something that was just too good to be true
In my dreams, you're never far away
You never say 'goodbye', you always stay
You're perfect, attentive...a true gentleman
And you love me much more than anyone can
We spend hours gazing into each other's eyes
Never wanting to turn away, but we both realize
That this will last for only a short while
You hold my face close, I see your smile
I'll always remember the way you look right now
Our lips meets so softly, and I'm hoping, somehow
That this isn't a dream and I'll never awaken
But I open my eyes and from my arms you've been taken
I close my eyes once more and I can almost feel
The touch of your lips on mine...so soft...so real
But somehow I know better...whether I like it or I don't
It was only a dream, it didn't happen...and it won't
Its so very cruel the way things end in dreams
Almost quite real...yet so very extreme
Hilda Coronado, Feb. 23rd, 1998
Ok, that's it...how did y'all like it?
Thanks for reading! Please, will some more of you post some of your own writings or special thoughts?
Thanks!
Hilda >^..^<
I have been writing poems for about 10 years now. Many or most of them are ''mushy love stuff'' (AlexJr's opinion
Anyway, I'll start this out by posting one of my very favourite poems for you...it is called:
DREAMS OF YOU
Somtimes, in the deepest, darkest of nights
After everyone has turned out their lights
I hear your voice, you seem to be saying
That in the dark night, is where you'll be staying
Buried under layers of dreams upon dreams
Almost quite real...yet so very extreme
Days turn to nights and nights into days
Darkness that is followed by the sun's rays
Again, I awaken from a dream about you
Something that was just too good to be true
In my dreams, you're never far away
You never say 'goodbye', you always stay
You're perfect, attentive...a true gentleman
And you love me much more than anyone can
We spend hours gazing into each other's eyes
Never wanting to turn away, but we both realize
That this will last for only a short while
You hold my face close, I see your smile
I'll always remember the way you look right now
Our lips meets so softly, and I'm hoping, somehow
That this isn't a dream and I'll never awaken
But I open my eyes and from my arms you've been taken
I close my eyes once more and I can almost feel
The touch of your lips on mine...so soft...so real
But somehow I know better...whether I like it or I don't
It was only a dream, it didn't happen...and it won't
Its so very cruel the way things end in dreams
Almost quite real...yet so very extreme
Hilda Coronado, Feb. 23rd, 1998
Ok, that's it...how did y'all like it?
Thanks for reading! Please, will some more of you post some of your own writings or special thoughts?
Thanks!
Hilda >^..^<