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Damita & Chico biographies on Petfinder are awful. They were written in February & a lot has happened since then. I have learned so much more about Damita & Chico has gotten BIG(GER)!! Anyways, I don't know how to write a biography that sounds good. Every time I write one, it sounds good to me, but when I come back to it later, it sounds bad.
Here's what I know about Damita:
she's mostly blind(I suspect she sees only shadows)
she gets around with great ease
she has never bumped into anything
she MUST have a home with another friendly cat
she loves to play with any toys, but she particularly loves noisy ones
she loves to get petted, sit in your lap, & get her tummy rubbed
she is very people oriented
uses a scratching post
she gets along with cats & dogs
she is approx. 5 years old
Here's what I know about Chico:
he's very playful
he gets along with cats & dogs
he is smaller range of adult size
he is still very kitten-ish
he uses a scratching post
he is approx. a year old
The hardest part about writing a bio for Damita is playing down the blindness thing. Honestly, most people don't know she is blind until they see the "film" covering her eyes or I tell them. The hardest part about writing Chico's bio is I don't know what to put in it. I never really know what to include.
Can anybody help me with these? What else should I include? What should I leave out?
Here's what I know about Damita:
she's mostly blind(I suspect she sees only shadows)
she gets around with great ease
she has never bumped into anything
she MUST have a home with another friendly cat
she loves to play with any toys, but she particularly loves noisy ones
she loves to get petted, sit in your lap, & get her tummy rubbed
she is very people oriented
uses a scratching post
she gets along with cats & dogs
she is approx. 5 years old
Here's what I know about Chico:
he's very playful
he gets along with cats & dogs
he is smaller range of adult size
he is still very kitten-ish
he uses a scratching post
he is approx. a year old
The hardest part about writing a bio for Damita is playing down the blindness thing. Honestly, most people don't know she is blind until they see the "film" covering her eyes or I tell them. The hardest part about writing Chico's bio is I don't know what to put in it. I never really know what to include.
Can anybody help me with these? What else should I include? What should I leave out?