My creativity for the day!

[adymarie]

Sensations

Sensations
Like tiny pin prickles of flames
Tingling, soothing
Making me alive.

Sensations
Filling the little cracks of my soul
Healing, nurturing
Making me alive.

Sensations
Overflowing my heart with love
Giving, recieving
Making me alive.

 

[valanhb]

I like it Ady. I've always prefered "non-traditional" poetry, and I really like your scheme. Very effective.

(Ok, I'll tell the teacher in me to go away now.

)

 

[debra myers]

That was wonderful! Very creative!

 

[adymarie]

Thanks Debra and Heidi! Heidi - I also prefer non-traditional poetry. Something in me rebels at the thought of structuring creativity.

 

[jeanie g.]

O.K., Adrienne, you got your self shanghaied! Get thee over to Let's Make a Story, and add a paragraph or so! We'd like to have you, you know!

 

[adymarie]

I am working on the other story!

 

[jeanie g.]

So's Heidi! I wrote an early paragraph too! The more the merrier.